Friday, 7 May 2021

Fish bones.

Title: Fish bones Ingredients: Tuna Lettuce Bread Equipment: Knife Plate Method: 1. Put two pieces of bread beside each other on the plate; 2. Put the tuna on the bread do not butter the bread; 3. Get two pieces of lettuce and place it on the piece of bread with the Tuna; 4. Get the other slice of bread and placed on top of the lettuce; 5. The sandwich in half and now you have yourself a sandwich. My goal: Add more punctuation. Ryan's recipe
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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous27 May 2021 at 18:30

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  2. Anonymous9 June 2021 at 12:03

    I like your writing. Maybe there could be some paragraphs?

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  3. Anonymous11 June 2021 at 13:17

    I like your writing but did you think about previewing it to see if it look OK.

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  4. Anonymous16 June 2021 at 11:52

    well done Ryan very interesting to read I think it was a very good topic but for next time I think you should add paragraphs

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