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Wednesday, 14 April 2021
12 things in Mr s pocket
12 things in Mrs S’s / Mr K’s pocket / Sponge Bob Square Pants - Choose an interesting character, who you could use for this piece of writing.
Writing task:
To think of 12 things that are either in Mr S’s or Mr K’s pocket or Sponge Bob Square Pants
Focus: Punctuation and Sentences.
Punctuation Success:
OK: All sentences have capital letters and fullstops. Example: In Sponge Bob’s pockets there was a key.
There was also rubber.
Good: There are a range of other punctuation eg commas, question marks etc Example In Sponge Bob’s pocket there was a telescope. Why? This is so he could see where he was going.
Excellent: I can use semicolons in a list. See example below
Example - 12 things in Sponge Bob Square Pants Pocket.
In Sponge Bob’s pocket you would find: Six crusty old crabby patties, in case he gets lost under the sea; an invite to Patrick Star’s 28th birthday party in case he forgets the address; …….
12 things in Mr s pocket
is essential to Mr s is Mr Barnacles; he always carries a magical unicorn horn; And His car keys but I don't know why because he has a magical unicorn horn that can make a run really fast; And he always keeps his Superfast writing pen his front left pocket that make a him right hole 8 page story and 10 seconds; And when he wakes up he always puts his joke book and his front right pocket and he's always prepared to read one and make you laugh always has his good old top hat in his pockets for the joke book;
He also has his phone and his shirt pocket to make any emergency calls to Mrs s about his day; He always carries an extra Krusty Krab Patty and his pockets if he gets hungry; And of course he always has a football in case he gets bored; hey always carry sunglasses on those hot summer days;And he loves his unicorn head Mr ucillies; ain't nobody knows but he always has a rotten Mandarin in his pocket; And last but not least a guidebook to Ultimate frisbee
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hi Ryan that is very funny I loved reading it but there is some spelling mistakes in it. But other than that I love reading it good job Ryan
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