Friday, 23 October 2020

Dear Mr Hall

 Dear Mr Hall    Address Makauri School 


we need help with the flying fox it is very rusty. It will not go so we thought you will be able to help us we had ideas like we could put oil in it but then we thought we would need an expert to come and help us.

And Mr Hall your that expert.



our playground is slowly falling apart but the flying fox is the worst so we need you.

You. you are the one and you know it.

flying fox in the senior playground needs you. so will you come and help us.


yours sincerely Ryan Phillips.A
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2 comments:

  1. Quinn M23 October 2020 at 13:33

    I love the way you put our playground is slowly falling a part and the playground needs you.

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  2. lachlan9 November 2020 at 14:02

    hi
    Ryan
    I love your letter to Mr Hall

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